Today I have the pleasure of introducing a special guest for my Writers on the Rise series of interviews: Caleb Fox, a fantasy author whose debut novel Zadayi Red comes out from Tor today. As always, feel free to check out his website and his book on Amazon. The premise of Zadayi Red intrigued me with its inspirations from Cherokee legend, and Caleb entertained me with his replies to my interview questions. Curious? Read on!

Hello, Caleb! Care to introduce yourself?

News flash! Caleb Fox is actually only a front name for me, his spirit animal, Quolodi. That’s the Cherokee word for bear. I dictated the novel Zadayi Red to Caleb, and I’m tired of him swiping the credit. Putting himself ahead of an Immortal, what effrontery!

Oh, you want me to be serious. I, the planetary Caleb, come from Arkansas, where my family was redneck on one side of the mountain and redskin (Cherokee) on the other. I rushed through college, grad school, professoring, and a great job as movie and theater critic of the big Hearst newspaper in Los Angeles. Then I slowed down enough to write movies and books, and meet my great wife Sarita, who is also a novelist. We live both on the edge of the Navajo rez near Monument Valley and in the wine country north of San Francisco. I love Sarita, our children, writing, playing music, and wild country. As a pipe carrier and pourer of the sweat lodge, I walk the good red road.

Can you tell us about your debut novel, Zadayi Red?

In Zadayi Red (which is the first book of the Spirit Flight series) I set out to create a world of mysticism and magic, the world most Americans don’t believe in (but I know is real). I saw an opportunity in the prehistoric peoples of this continent. Readers realize that those cultures were steeped in mysticism, and there they will accept animal guides, shape-shifters, spirit journeys to the world above, and so on. The story turned out to be something like the myths of the Greek gods, a human matrix where the gods play, help out, and cause mischief. I chose to write about the predecessors of the Cherokee people to honor my own ancestors. (Sorry, you Welsh and Irish ancestors, you’ll have to wait.)

I think Zadayi Red might be the first fantasy novel I have seen that draws on Native American legend. What was it like writing in this genre?

Fantasy is wonderful. It kicks down the palace of realism and lets the imagination fly. I couldn’t have written this novel as historical fiction if I wanted to–not enough is known about the Native peoples of that region at that time. So I took the hints that the record gives us about these prehistoric people and blew them up into a narrative reality. Or, since I think the world of imagination is as real as the world of convenience stores and cop cars, a narrative sur-reality.

How did you research for your novel, and what have you learned about the process?

A daunting job. First I learned all I could about the Cherokee people of historic times, since contact with the Spanish in the mid 1500s. Then, with the expert help of my friend Vince Wilcox, former curator of the American Indian Museum, I imagined it backward another millennium. First, this world needed to be much more magical than the one the Spanish reported, since their Christianity blinded them to the spirituality of Native people. Then, I needed to use the Cherokee language, Cherokee customs, Cherokee myths, and so on–and at the same time picture them in what might have been an earlier form. Because culture changes, language changes, ceremonies change, and so do the great stories and the ideas about the gods, or Immortals. In short, take reality and morph it backwards.

Then, having envisioned this lovely and terrifying world, I had to induce the reader to see and experience it, and tell a story in it. Though I wanted to honor the Cherokee, I sought to reach further into the past to their predecessors and to a more mystical world view. Difficult, but a lot of fun.

What has your path to publication been like so far?

My publisher, TOR Books, was kind enough to give me a good opportunity for this different sort of book by contracting for a series, not just a single title. Luckily, my editor is the sort who helps a writer become a bigger, better version of himself, rather than change him. Launching a series in this economy, though, scares the devil out of me.

What advice do you have for authors seeking to maintain an online presence?

I’m barely learning to do this. The Authors Guild has helped me create a nice web site, and I blog. Your readers could probably teach me about social networking.

Any other advice to share? Perhaps, the most valuable thing you have learned about writing?

You need the perfect writing hat. Each project requires one with just the right attitude.

Well, really, for me writing is a joy. Along with hanging out with Sarita, it is the emotional center of my life. It transports me the way listening to great music does. My advice is, if you feel the same way, you must write. Otherwise you betray yourself. If you don’t feel like that, do something else you love.

What are your inspirations?

My love of life, my sense of fun, Sarita, our kids, playing music, and reading. I love to read–Shakespeare, Mark Twain, Harper Lee, Carlos Ruiz Zafon, Dean Koontz, Robert B. Parker–the whole cosmos of fiction. Within fantasy, I seek out urban fantasy.

What has been the best part of writing?

Getting lost in the day’s pages. Letting it flow. Creating something out of nothing. Love and creativity are the mortals’ taste of the divine.

And what has been the worst part?

Worrying. Which goes away when I write.

Where do you hope do be in a year?

Finished with the third book in the Spirit Flight series, writing something I haven’t dreamed of yet, playing music twice as often as I do, and spending more time relaxing with Sarita.

And here’s a teaser from Caleb’s Zadayi Red:

Sunoya woke up lying on a bed of soft grasses. She smiled at them because they were pink. Turquoise sedges lined the creek. Rhododendrons clumped out in spurts of wild hues, scarlet, cobalt, and canary yellow. The rocks of the hills glittered like gem stones. Above them the sky glowed a gentle salmon and gold that never changed, and the soft air was warm, always warm.

She stepped over to a stream, bent down, and took a drink of cool, orange water. In the Land beyond the Sky Arch no creatures ate–Immortals could not die, and they did not eat other beings–but everyone drank.

She wondered why she had dreaded this trip. She loved this world. She wished her people had never left here. A long time ago, before they came to Earth and the big expanse of land called Turtle Island, the Galayi and all other animals and plants lived in this country beyond the Sky Arch. They were the children of the Immortals, progeny of the models all creatures sprang from, shadows of the great Bear who was primogenitor of all other bears, offspring of the Raven who was the archetype of all ravens, and so on. At that time archetypes and descendants alike were immortal.

But they were crowded, bumping elbows and knees in a country that was too small. Looking down from on high, they saw a planet that seemed to be nothing but water and wondered whether they could find a place there to make lives. Several animals tried to find land, but only little Water Beetle succeeded. He dived to the bottom of that strange world and brought up dirt, and more dirt, and finally all the dirt that made Turtle Island. So the people migrated onto that muddy ground. They didn’t know the troubles they were in for. In Sunoya’s opinion you could sum up all of Earth’s problems in a single word, mortality.

Sunoya spoke in her mind to her guide Tsola. Are you with me?

Yes, said Tsola, but she volunteered nothing more.

If I call them, they’ll come, right?

Sunoya, you know that. Be your full self.

So she walked up the creek lazily. She could simply think of any one, or say his name, and he would appear. Or wouldn’t. Immortals were whimsical and not particularly interested in the doings on Earth. Occasionally, they were gone to Turtle Island, looking after their offspring planet. Sunoya thought of those shed met before and wanted to see again, and those she hadn’t gotten to meet. Very carefully, she did not think of the very last thing that happened here beyond the Sky Arch–the way Thunderbird had said goodbye to her.

Sunoya, you have nothing to be afraid of.

[As the scene goes on, Thunderbird grills Sunoya and then makes her a great gift, a spirit animal of her own.]

After a bit of a hiatus, I’m happy to present to you another Writers on the Rise interview with writer and illustrator Wendy Martin! Please give her a warm welcome and visit her website.

Hello, Wendy! Can you tell us a little about yourself?

I am both writer and illustrator. As far back as I can remember I have been writing stories for my art and vice versa. My first “published” works all appeared in a Jr. High Arts & Literature Yearbook. All the students in the school were eligible to submit to the publication but only a couple of dozen students had their works included. I had both a poem (with someone else’s illustration on it.) and two line drawings included.

Do you still have some of the art and stories you created when you were a kid? Every once and a while I come across some of mine, and it can be amusing to see how similar (and different) they are from what I’m creating now.

I am an unrepentant pack rat. I have art and writing from as far back as elementary school. I also managed to accumulate some of my mother’s college and high school literary attempts.

I think my writing and style have matured over the years. Stylistically, there are certain themes that reappear throughout my fiction stories. I write what I read. I have always been drawn to fantasy and magic. Over the years, as what is acceptable in commercial  fiction changes, my writing has changed to conform to the trends. One thing that still holds true today as it did yesterday is writing what you know. I use my experiences in life to fill out the lives of my  characters. I am lucky to be able to eavesdrop on my teenager and friends when they are hanging out here. It has helped me capture a true MG and YA voice in my work.

What are you currently writing?

I am in the middle of several projects. A picture book in its bazillionth revision, I will also work on the art for this project. Two MG/YA fantasy thrillers, both in the early stages. And an adult non-fiction parenting book I am collaborating with another author. I also try and keep up the half a dozen blogs/newsletters I have committed myself to writing. Maybe I should be committed for thinking I can do all this and still find time to sleep and eat.

About how much time do you spend, on average, writing daily? Also, how do you find the time to write? I know this is a perennial problem among writers.

I am self employed at the moment. I had a part time job up until Feb 2008, but with touring, I got too busy to do my writing, my touring, taking care of my family AND dealing with an hour commute to a job I was terribly over-qualified for. So, after sending the husband and kid off for the day, I am at my computer and at work by 7:30 am every morning. I try to keep regular hours. I make a list before quitting for the day about my goals for the next day. And Sunday evenings, I make a weekly goal list. I “officially” stop work at 3 pm when my teenager arrives home from school. Sometimes, though, if I have a deadline looming or am having a particularly productive day, I’ll continue working until I can’t keep my eyes open. I try not to do that too often because the rest of my life rapidly deteriorates from neglect. It’s all about balance.

What else have you written?

I have written articles for non-fiction adult publications, crafts and stories for children’s e-zines, book reviews for other publications, as well as my own book review blog. Many times I also include art for the articles, crafts and recipes.

Where are you at on your path to publication?

My first picture book was published in 2005, the second and third came out last year.  A fourth picture book came out in February, but I am only the illustrator on that one.

I’ve been bitten by the novel writing bug, (Actually, the characters came to me in my dreams and demanded I tell their stories.) so I feel like I am beginning all over again since the rules for picture books and novels are entirely different in many ways. I’ll never be bored, that’s for sure.

My characters only drop by my dreams occasionally, and I can’t say they have ever been so cooperative as to tell me their stories. What sort of dreams have you had, and how in particular have they inspired you?

That’s a hard question to answer. After all dreams are so often lost after the moment of waking up. I only know when I am stuck in a story my characters will invade my dreams and show me where they want to go. I only have to be strong enough to let go of the control of where the story is going. I never actually know where a story will go or where  it will end up until it comes out of the keyboard.

I went to a lecture at a writing workshop where the presenter said the best stories come from the subconscious. The trick as a writer is to let go of our consciousness and let the sub conscious take over. It’s a learned skill like any other. Once I learned it, going along for the ride became a bit like riding on a roller coaster. Exhilarating and scary all at the same time. And sometimes at the end of the ride, I feel like I might need to throw up.

What advice do you have for writers?

Write everyday, even if you don’t feel like it. I really like the “Morning Pages” idea from the Artist’s Way by Julia Cameron. Clears out the muck and monkey chatter so there is room in the brain to move forward on real projects. I have to confess though I don’t do the morning pages as much as I used to back before I was first published.

Good advice, though sometimes I have trouble sitting down and writing something every day. Do you think that writing while inspired comes out any differently than writing while not?

If I waited to write until the Muse hit me, I’d never sit down at the keyboard. I find if I sit down and start typing, even if I start out writing garbage, eventually the Muse will kick in and things will start to flow easier. It all goes back to getting out of my own way.

What has been the best part of writing?

Email from fans thanking me for what I’ve written and how it has helped them or their kids.

And what has been the worst part?

Dealing with the business end of things like contracts, royalty statements and setting up appearances as an unknown.

What advice do you have for authors who are planning appearances?

Be prepared for an empty room. Sad, but it happens to almost everyone.

Make sure you know what you plan to talk about and that it will fill the allotted time.

Figure out how you will deal with the inevitable wanna-be who asks about self-publishing. It never fails. Also, the newbie who wants you to “put a good word in with” you publisher, agent, publicist, etc.

Bring handouts like book marks for people to visit you later. A place where people can sign up to join a mailing list is also good, but not all venues are appropriate for that.

Remember to smile. Smile until it hurts. Smile even if you don’t feel like it, or your feet hurt or someone isn’t being nice.

I was lucky enough to have one of my first book signings with a fellow (experienced) author. He told me an event was a success if I spoke to one person or signed one book. Everything after that was bonus points. I’ve kept that in mind at all my other appearances. After the first one, I label the event a success and can relax and enjoy myself.

Where do you hope do be in a year?

I hope to finish one of my current projects and be picked up by an agent who will shop it to the well-known publishers who are closed to unagented materials.  The picture book is the closest to being finished, but I may end up shopping my MG/YA first.

And here’s a teaser from Wendy’s Add a Pinch of Anger:

They edged round the teacher’s desk and Becca looked closely up and down the space besides the desk to find the spot she’d first seen the smoke. At first she saw nothing. Then a greenish glow caught her eye. She elbowed Sam and pointed. “There.”

Sam looked. “Where? I don’t see anything.”

“It’s right there, about the size of a dime! It’s floating there in the air.” How could he not see it? It was so obvious to her. She jabbed her finger in the direction of the glowing hole.

“What’s floating? I don’t see anything, Becca. Stop fooling around. We’ll get caught and get detention. Let’s get out of here.”

She grabbed his head and pushed it down to her eye level. Her finger so close it was almost touching the floating green spot in the air. “There, Sam, there! Don’t tell me you can’t see it. It’s so bright in this dark room. You have to see it!”

Sam looked where she pointed. He was scrunched over almost double to have his eyes at the same level as hers. He was about to straighten up when he thought he saw – what? – something. He closed his eyes and opened them again to get a good look. Becca was right. About 4 feet off the ground in the middle of the air there was a glowing green spot the size of a dime. Weird. He bent down further and got close to the spot. “Hey! You can look right into it like a window,” he exclaimed. He got on his knees to take a closer look. Putting his eye to the spot like it was a keyhole he looked inside. Then he jerked back and looked around the room. He moved to the other side of the green spot and looked around. Then he returned to the front and placed his eye on the spot again. He whistled softly in amazement.

“What? What is it?” She shoved at him to move aside but couldn’t budge him.

“It’s amazing, Becca. There’s a whole world in there. The most beautiful place I’ve ever seen in my life! And there’s this really hot chick wearing next to nothing. It looks like she’s gathering flowers or something. Only they can’t be flowers because she has to catch them because they are trying to fly away from her. But she’s stuffing them into a basket with a flap when she does catch ‘em and they aren’t trying to escape when she puts new ones in with the others.” He was silent for a time.

“Let me see!” Becca nudged him. He didn’t pay any attention. She glanced at the clock. “Come on, we’ve got to get out of here before the bell rings for next period.” She started to walk back to the door to unlock it and check that the hallway was clear. Sam screamed. Becca swung around in time to see Sam hitting the ground holding his eye with his hand. Tears were streaming down his face hidden behind his hand as he squirmed on the ground in pain. “What happened? Are you okay?” Becca raced to his side. Sam groaned.

“She saw me. She turned around and saw me watching. Then she poked me in the eye. Hard.” He wiped his leaking nose and eyes with the edge of his sweatshirt sleeve. “It was worth it though.” He made a lopsided grin. “She had the most amazing butt cheeks.” He ducked as Becca took a swing at him.

“You are such an idiot sometimes,” she said in disgust, “Let me see your eye.” She took his head in her hands and looked carefully at the tearing eye. It was all red and looked as if it might be starting to swell. “We’d better get you to the nurse and get an ice pack on this.” She helped him to his feet and worked her way with him toward the door. On the way, she glanced back at the green spot. It was gone, but there was a small puff of smoke where it had been. The smoke dissipated quickly. Then there was nothing. She unlocked the door and headed out into the hall once more filled with students.

For our eighth Writers on the Rise interview, please welcome Kim Baccellia! You can visit her website here and her blog here. I have one more interview lined up after this; if you are a writer still seeking an editor and/or agent, and are interested in being interviewed, please let me know and I will see what I can do.

Hello, Kim! Can you tell us a little about yourself?

I’m a former first grade teacher that decided to finally write that novel I’d been talking about! I volunteer at my son’s school and library. I also review books and plan on doing more for Midwest Book Reviews. But first I need to concentrate on finishing my third story!

I’ve also been a Cybils-Children and YA book literary awards-panelist for the past three years. This year I helped judge over 126 nominated MG fiction books! Coming up with the finalists was fun.

After reading so many books, how do you apply your experience as an awards panelist to your own writing? What do you think makes a book a winner?

Wow, this is a great question! If anything my experience as a Cybils panelist has opened my eyes to how subjective this business really is. A book that I love might not be something others really care for.

The winning formula for a book is the million dollar question! But the books that seem to stand out are books that speak to the audience. For example Alvin Ho was a great example of a boy that relates to seven-year-old boys in the same way Junie B. Jones does for girls. We need more book like that!

Also, Twilight is another example of how some critics trash the book but teen girls love it. I remember one day asking a thirteen-year-old why she loved these books. “Edward. Duh, what else?”

What are you currently writing?

Tentative title is Step Stone Away. It’s a MG fantasy/mystery. I’m having fun writing it as it has a little of everything including an Egyptian love goddess. My sister, who’s studying to be an Egyptologist and did volunteer work at the British Museum, has been helping with the research to make sure I get that right.

Here’s the blurb: Thirteen-year-old Jordan Lake longs for the kind of romance her legendary Aunt Alice always experienced. When Jordan comes across an ancient bracelet that used to belong to Aunt Alice she figures that wearing it will help her have the romance of her dreams. More like a nightmare. Wearing it unleashes the curse of the love goddess Hathor who decides it’s fun to mess with the middle school social scene. Now Jordan has to figure out a way to vanquish Hathor and still get a date to the dance all while unraveling the mystery of where Aunt Alice has been for the last fifty years.

Having an Egyptologist-in-training for a sister sounds handy (and fun). Can you tell us more about the kind of research you have been doing for Step Stone Away? What tips do you have for writers of fiction with historical elements?

My sister has been going through her own research to help make sure I get the facts right with Step Stone Away. She steers me clear from the whole ‘Hollywood’ version of ancient Egypt. She’s also sent me incense from Egypt and right now I’m waiting for Hathor’s sistrum.

I think writers who do stories with historical elements need to do their research to make sure the facts are right. For example, in Step Stone Away, I have the father of my main character mention how the priests robbed the tombs. My sister caught me on that one! Also she corrected me on a stone I had in this one bracelet.

The Internet is great source to find material too. No longer does a writer have to go to a library to do research. I’ve found lots of info this way. I also went to the Bowers museum exhibit on ancient Egypt, which was fascinating.

What else have you written?

Earrings of Ixtumea and Crossed Out. Crossed Out will be coming out later this year. Here’s the blurb: Stephanie Stewart didn’t ask for the gift of guiding the deceased to the Other Side, but she’s stuck with it. Why can’t dead people just follow that bright light and leave her alone?When Mr. Undead wants to use her for his own evil purposes, her special ability becomes a major liability. Suddenly Stephanie finds herself faced with a choice–trust others with her ability or the world as she knows it will go to hell. Literally.

How did you go about getting your first two books published? Any words of wisdom to share about your experience?

I think it’s better to wait a little longer on accepting one of the first offers that comes your way. Do your research too. I also learned that writing the book is the easy part. It’s all the promotion that comes once your book is out that’s tough. Also make sure you know who your publisher’s distributor is. This info is important as most bookstores order from certain ones.

A big thing I’ve learned is to get out there and not be afraid to ask.

Where are you at on your path to publication?

I’ve been taking small steps that hopefully will lead to getting representation from an agent. A couple years ago I attended my regional SCBWI Agent’s Day conference and got to hear Laura Rennert of the Andrea Brown Literary Agency speak. I remember thinking, that’s what I want in an agent. Someone who not only knows the market but is passionate about each of her clients.

What advice do you have for writers?

First off, don’t submit anything unless it’s ready to go. Don’t get inpatient to get published. I found out the hard way that this doesn’t help with your writing career. Be careful on what you blog, especially any negative stuff. Yes, agents and editors do read that. And finally, join a critique group. Mine are awesome and helped so much.

I know what you mean about being impatient to submit. This usually happens to me when I know I should probably go fort at least one more draft, but I can’t wait to see what others will think. How do you deal with your impatience?

I think my experience with Earrings of Ixtumea has taught me that being impatient to submit only ruins any chances you might have with an agent and editors from more traditional houses. What I mean is if you submit something that isn’t totally done or is only a first draft, well, agents know that. And that blows any chance you might have had with them.

One of my words for this year is being disciplined. I really have to stop myself when I have that overwhelming urge to just submit. I’m really trying!

What are your inspirations?

A rejection from a publisher had me wondering if I should turn that recent lemon -rejection-into lemonade. So I spent a few days brainstorming a premise which involved romance, thirteen year olds, a bracelet, and of course, an Egyptian goddess who looks a lot like Angelina Jolie. Then I queried that same publisher with the premise and a couple chapters. They wanted more.

For Crossed Out, the idea that maybe someone had the job to make all those crosses you see on the sides of the highway came to me. A few years before that, my own sister had been murdered and an experience I had made me wonder if maybe not all the dead knew they were in fact dead. Add an undead hot guy who tries to change the rules.

What has been the best part of writing?

To be able to map out a story and see it come to life. Getting email fan letters has been cool too.

And what has been the worst part?

Comparing myself to other writers who have agents and get those big auction deals. I admit it makes me feel like I’m maybe not ‘good’ enough. But my online writing groups get me back on track!

Rejections are tough too. Especially when you read that others get agent interest after only a few. I try to look at rejections as a mini lesson. I also make sure to thank all editors and agents who took the time to read my work.

I know online writing groups help many writers stay on track and keep their spirits up, as well as providing invaluable feedback on their writing. How did you find your groups online, and what advice do you have for those looking?

I found my one on-line group through my association with Kelly Herold who’s the cofounder of the Cybils. I did some YA reviews for The Edge of the Forest, her on-line literary review site and when she had an opening in her group, she emailed me and asked if I was interested. Yes! This group has been wonderful!

My other on-line group I heard about from a writer friend. This same friend directed me to the fab Joyce Sweeney, who mentors YA writers in Florida.

If someone is looking for an on-line critique my advice is to check your local and regional SCBWI. Usually they post names of others who either are in a group or are looking to join one. Also check Verla Kay’s board. Some writers post opening there.

Where do you hope do be in a year?

Hmmm. In a year I hope to have interest in Step Stone Away. I would love to have an agent by then but I know that might not be a realistic goal.

I’m also hoping I don’t get too discouraged and to not give up. My biggest challenge is to be persistent even if it seems like it’s almost impossible to get that agent or traditional book deal.

And here’s a teaser from Kim’s Step Stone Away:

I stopped listening to Maddy. In our teacher’s hands was the most amazing bouquet of red roses. I could smell the sweet scent. Senorita Garza’s hair wasn’t pinned up but cascaded down her slim shoulders. Wow, she looked really pretty without her hair pulled back into an old lady hair style. Her eyes twinkled just like Audrey Hepburn’s in Roman Holiday. I couldn’t help but sense that love might be involved.

I glanced at Maddy, who had a dreamy expression on her face. Boy, if anyone saw her, they’d think she had something to do with our teacher’s sudden happiness and not a piece of metal that happened to be…

“Ouch!” I jumped up. A shock shot up my arm.

“Are you okay, Jordan?” Concern lined Senorita Garza’s otherwise smooth face. She put the roses on her desk and marched toward my seat.

“Ewwww!” One of Jessica’s friends screamed. “Ohmigod. Bugs!”

Screams filled the air. Chairs slammed against the walls. Girls and even a couple boys, jumped up on top of the tables.

I glanced over and saw beetle-like things climb out of the roses and scamper across the tile floor.

Oh, great. Not bugs again! Couldn’t Hathor be at least a little more original?

“Dude, check it out.” Nathan, one of the skateboarders Andrew hung with, pointed at a huge black and shiny bug. The beetle like bug must have been at least a couple inches long. Its shell reflected the florescent light.

Clase!” Senorita Garza’s flushed face grew even redder while she tried to get order back in the classroom.

“Kill it, dude.” Another guy shouted.

Right at that moment, a sensation similar to needles shot through my wrist. I shook my arm to make the feeling stop, avoiding the bugs coming our way. I hopped on top of a chair.

For the seventh Writers on the Rise interview, please welcome Kirstin Daley! You can visit her blog here.

Hello, Kirstin! Can you tell us a little about yourself?

I’d love to! Well I’ve been writing since as long as I can remember. I remember writing short stories in grade two, and loving it then. I’ve wanted to get published since I saw a kid do it on TV. I looked at the kid and thought “I’m going to be kid author.” Well that never did happen but I wanted to be a writer still so I just changed my dream to being an author period. I write pretty much everything from poetry to short stories, but novels are my love. I just love creating plots, and characters. I could see me doing this for the rest of my life.

I also wanted be a teenage prodigy novelist way back when, so I started hacking away at novels around the age of thirteen. Needless to say, I missed that deadline by several years. What advice do you have for novelists who start young?

I would saw to write and a lot, because I noticed that when I wrote more I got better as a writer. I began to evolve and that’s the only way you are going to get any better. And of course the most important bit of advice I can ever give anyone who wants to be a writer is to love it and have as much fun as you can. Being published would be awesome but loving what you do is what makes it truly amazing.

What are you currently writing?

Currently I am re-writing my novel Dawn of Destiny: A New Beginning. It’s the first of my Dawn of Destiny trilogy. It’s about a young vampire who is trying to come to grips with being a vampire, but along the way is thrown into something a lot bigger. It was originally a short story I wrote at the age of 11, but I later started making it into a novel in university. It’s now been four years and I’m still working on it. I tried to forget about it like a year ago, but I’m too much in love with it, and my characters. I’ve realized I can’t stop writing it so I’m going to give it another try.

Vampires are quite popular in young adult fiction nowadays, particularly with the obvious example. Twilight. What do you think of the vampire books out there right now, and what sets yours apart from the pack?

I am a huge Twilight fan and to be honest I’m terrified people will think that I’m copying her, but to be honest I started writing it a long time before I ever heard about it. What sets mine apart are the characters and the fact my vampires are different. Vampirism in my novel is more a disease, so they turn out a lot more human then in any other vampire book I’ve read. My characters are very original in my opinion because they aren’t just vampires, they have these back stories and interesting quirks that I, myself, love. 

What else have you written?

I’ve written a lot of stuff but not much of it has actually become anything. So far I’ve finished two novels, the one I’m re-writing now Dawn of Destiny, and my other novel Dark Mourning. I would like to eventually have Dark Mourning published as well. Dark Mourning is a paranormal romance about a orphan who falls in love with who she believes to be the ghost of her mother’s ex boyfriend.

Where are you at on your path to publication?

So far I’ve sent queries out for Dark Mourning, but nothing really came out of that, so I’ve decided to work on another story and come back to Dawn of Destiny.

What advice do you have for writers?

Hang in there. Writing really is a hard business and you will get rejections, but if you stick with it and just write because you love it then it will be a lot easier for you. Writing just to write makes it more fun then writing hoping you’ll come up with some bestseller.

Even if you love writing, sometimes it can be hard to find what you love to write. This thought occurs to me every time I’m stuck on a draft or fishing for new ideas. I have to read other books and brainstorm before I’m inspired again. How do you find what you love to write?

It’s usually when I’m writing something and always going back to it. If I’m always wondering what will happen next, or day dreaming a scene then I know I love it.

What are your inspirations?

Stephen King and J.K. Rowling are two of my major inspirations. They both have made from so little, and also never let rejections get them down. They both had so much rejection, but made it to be so famous. I would love to be famous but really I’d love to be like them as they are so down to earth and seem to just write because they love it.

I also use music a lot for my writing. I’ll be listening to music and think oh that is so a song for this character, or goes with this part of the book. From there I may come up with back stories, or other things. Lately I’ve been using Within Temptation a lot.

I know a lot of writers have playlists for their novels, and I also listen to music while I write, since it helps me get into the right mood. What kind of atmosphere do you like to be in when you write?

It all depends on what part of the novel I’m working on. If its sad then I like to go for read sad music but it depends on me as well. Sometimes I just like listening real depressing music for the heck of it, while other times I need the up beat music.

What has been the best part of writing?

Re-reading something that is really good. I love the feeling of looking at something I wrote and thinking, “Hey, this is actually really good.”

I also love getting some of my work back from friends and others and hearing that they really loved something I wrote, or that they are in love with my characters as much as I am. It makes me really happy.

And what has been the worst part?

Rejection. I don’t take it really well but I’m learning to accept it and use it to make me a better writer.

I agree that rejections, though they can sting, are also one of the best ways to improve your writing. What have you learned from them so far?

I’ve learned I need to be more patient and due a lot more work before I send them in. I’ve also come to learn to have thicker skin. Rejections are a part of writing and they aren’t trying to be mean but simply do their job.

Where do you hope do be in a year?

I’d love to have an agent in the next year, and have Dawn of Destiny finished on its way to publication.

And here’s a teaser from Kirstin’s Dawn of Destiny:

“Why?” I finally gasped, “why are you doing this?! What in the world did I ever do to you?”

Jason’s eyes flickered and I could tell something I said had finally registered. He was back in my world at last. I began to think that maybe I could reason with him, save myself. If nothing else I knew I had to try.

“Why are…”

“What did you do?” Jason interrupted, stroking my wet hair. I didn’t like the way he gazed down at me either, with a sort of longing that was far from innocent, “You didn’t do anything, that’s the thing about destiny love, you don’t have to do anything because it just happens. That’s the important thing as yours is connected with my own you see, and I really need it to come true.”

“My des…”

“Yes,” Jason interrupted. He suddenly looked rather impatient, “Your destiny. If everything goes according to plan, then well fur is going to fly.”

He started to go down toward my neck again and I screamed. I didn’t want him to finish, I didn’t want to die. I wasn’t able to scream for very long however, as within seconds his hand clamped tightly over my mouth.

“You could go on and scream. It’s not like anyone would hear you, that’s exactly why I planned it this way. You’re time has been numbered since the minute we met.”

Bonus! A book trailer for Dawn of Destiny: http://ca.youtube.com/watch?v=vWWuVydDr_s.

For the sixth Writers on the Rise interview, please welcome Emily Gruenke! You can visit her blog here. I have two more interviews scheduled after this one; if anyone is interested in being interviewed next, please leave a comment and let me know. I know lots of us love to hear the thoughts and tips of writers who are still hunting for an agent and/or editor.

Hello, Emily! Can you tell us a little about yourself?

I am married and have three children.  I was born in Utah (yes, I’m Mormon), but I grew up in sunny Southern California.  I have been living in Germany for about ten years now.  I have loved reading ever since they taught me the sounds the letters make.  I think that when I was in high school and I started to narrate my own life in my head, I knew I would end up writing.  It was that or the funny farm, I guess.

What are you currently writing?

Right now, I am working on a YA novel I wrote for National Novel Writing Month 2008.  At the moment, I am calling it Still Alive.  It’s about a girl who likes to fantasize about jumping into the irrigation canal near her house until somebody she knows and likes actually does take his own life. It sounds depressing, but I think it is going to be hopeful in the end.  I did manage to meet the 50,000 word count requirement by the end of the month and finish the first draft in time to qualify as a winner, which was very exciting.

I haven’t done NaNoWriMo myself, but I know quite a few writers who love it. What advice would you give to those thinking about trying it this November?

I set daily goals for my word count, and when I made that, I could stop writing to shower or grocery shop or feed my children without feeling guilty.  I wrote a lot at the beginning, and that gave me a little room to be flexible in the middle when I started to get tired.  None of us want to have to resort to having our characters spontaneously quote poetry or to giving our characters four names and using all of four every time we refer to them just to bulk up our word count, and achieving my daily goals helped keep me from feeling desperate enough to do any of that.

What else have you written?

I have also written a YA novel with a religious theme, which I am getting ready to send off to a publisher.  It is called Getting to Church.  It is about a young girl who was brought up Mormon, but, as is often the case, she begins to question her faith and what it is worth to her.

I also started a YA novel called Guinevere Jones.  It is about Guinevere Jones, who is not beautiful, and she falls in love with the most beautiful boy in her high school.  I am really at the beginning with this one, but I am pretty sure she is really smart and interesting, which she attributes to her lack of good looks.  She is also very cynical about love.  You can imagine how she will be dealing with her feelings for the high school hottie.

How do you draft your novels? Are you starting with an outline to guide your way, or letting the story grow more organically?

I’m not good with outlines.  I have never written one down.  I think I’m afraid that writing it would somehow force me to follow it.  I usually start with a few key events and scenes in mind and then I write to see where it will go from there.

Where are you at on your path to publication?

I’m just trying to figure out how things work right now.  I’m just learning about query letters and agents, but I feel like it’s time to get out of my own backyard and go see what’s happening at the playground as a writer.

What advice do you have for writers?

I’m just a beginner, but I think that my advice would be to keep doing it.  I don’t know if one can ever really stop without losing a part of one’s self.  At least that was my experience.  I tried to get on with my life as a wife and mother, but I couldn’t stop the ideas and thoughts from swimming around in my head.  Getting them out and onto paper was the only way to feel at peace.

What are your inspirations?

I am inspired by the people I know who are also out there writing.  I feel like the little sister who can learn from watching those who are ahead of me in the game.

What has been the best part of writing?

I think the best part so far has been finishing a first draft.  It just feels good to “finish” what you started.

It took me two years to finish a draft of my first novel. I remember how gleeful I was when I could finally write “The End.” What advice do you have for writers still trying to finish their first novel?

My first piece of advice is to keep writing.  No matter how daunting the task may appear from where you are or how much energy you have already used up to get to that point, you can finish this.  The only way you can fail to finish your novel is to stop writing.

My second piece of advice is to be generous with yourself.  Let yourself write and enjoy the process of getting to the end.  Don’t try to beat out all the kinks now.  There will be plenty of opportunity to revise later.

And what has been the worst part of writing?

Wondering if it is all a joke and fearing that somebody is going to say that I am completely without talent and that it will be true.

I know all too well what you mean about those “Am I talentless?” moments, and I’m pretty sure all writers doubt themselves at least once a book. What helps you to keep believing in your writing?

At first, I told myself that the only way to find out was to write and then see what came out.  That got me through the first novel.  When I went back to read that first draft, I found myself enjoying it.  I figure that is a good place to start as a writer.  Even though I know that there is progress to be made as far as my skills and technique, I feel like there is something at the base of my writing that I enjoy reading.

Where do you hope do be in a year?

I hope to be way out in the writing world, and not just hiding in my comfort zone.  I have only shown my work to one other writer friend, but I think I would benefit from the association with a larger number of writers.

Yes, I think it can be daunting to send your newborn novel out into the world and ask people if they like your baby or not, but the input can also be eye-opening. How do you plan on finding critiques? A critique group, a few critique buddies…?

I figured I would just start asking around.  I have friends and friends of friends who write, and I thought I would start with those contacts, since several have offered their help already.  I know there are places to go online to find critique groups, and I can always turn to those sources for critiques.

And here’s a teaser from Emily’s Still Alive:

I feel disappointed as I walk over the bridge connecting the school side of town to the side of town I live on and I still haven’t seen the red car.  Steve must have the flu or something, I tell myself.

I walk through the school parking lot and notice a group of seniors leaning on their cars and looking off into space.  Two of the girls are leaning on two of the guys and have their heads buried in the guy’s chests.  It looks strange.  I have never seen people with such lost expressions.

A chill crawls over my back and settles right in the middle of my chest.  I pull my jacket tighter around me as I pass by as if I think it could help chase away the chill inside of me.

As I walk through the hallways, it slowly sinks in what is wrong with the school today.  It is quiet.  It seems that words are only spoken in whispers, and there are a pitiful few of them at all.  I start to look around, and see few, possibly, no smiles on the faces of the students around me.

I can’t pull my jacket any tighter than it is, but I feel the need to try.  I have to shake off this chill.

Finally, I breathe a sigh of relief when I see Amanda and the other girls standing near my locker.

I try to smile and wave, but the thickness of the air strains my movements, and the eerie feeling on the campus chokes all calm out of me.

“What is going on?” I ask.  My hands are clenched into fists and my breath is caught in my chest.

“You know that guy Steve?  The senior who gives you a ride to school sometimes?” Lisa says.

“Yes,” I say.  My eyes are wide with fear, and I am blocking my thoughts from moving forward.  I can feel what is coming, but I want to be unaware for as long as possible.

“He’s dead,” Lisa says.

For the fifth of the Writers on the Rise interviews, here’s Shana Silver! Check out her blog here and her website here. Please comment if you enjoyed reading this interview, as well as if you have requests for future questions.

Hello, Shana! Can you tell us a little about yourself?
I’m 27 years old and live just outside NYC with my boyfriend of 5 1/2 years. Hopefully his title will soon be replaced with “fiance.” He is very awesome because he ignores me and lets me write instead of pay attention to him. In turn, I let him watch sports. It’s a great compromise.

When not writing, I’m a freelance computer animator. I’ve worked on a variety of things you’ve probably seen. I designed/animated the graphics for CBS Sports, the USA Network, truTV. I also did a lot of work on the cg animated The Barbie Diaries. Plus a ton of commercials. I invade your TV and you don’t even know it.

I know a lot of authors who have creative pursuits other than writing. Would you say your work in animation has influenced your writing, or vice versa?
There are parts of my animation job that help me with writing, but it’s probably not the kind you would think. Mainly, in the day job I’m always working with clients who require several rounds of revisions. Often times, I don’t agree with their suggestions, and yet, I have no choice. If I don’t make the changes, I’ll be fired. Still, there are ways to make it your own and feel proud of a direction you may not have taken the work otherwise. Sometimes we have to start from scratch on a project we worked hard on. Other times there may be multiple companies vying for the same job, and we have to pitch several ideas in hopes the client will choose one of ours and hire us. All this stuff really helps with my writing. I tend to look at revisions objectively, not subjectively because of this. And the pitches help me look at a single project in a variety of ways, coming up with different angles to tackle it, until I get the version that works.

Also, I’ve always been an artist and a writer my whole life. I’m not sure I can be happy with one and not the other. I find if I get into a freelance slump where I go a while without any gigs, my writing suffers as well. I miss the art stuff and that ends up seeping into my writing. I do think outletting my creativity in two different formats helps me not to get burnt out.

What are you currently writing?
I have two WIPs I’m working on right now. My agent wants me to keep the premises of them under wraps until they go on submission. I will say that my main project is contemporary YA and loosely based off a classic story that hasn’t been re-told yet. It’s humorous, has a fun romance, and I had a blast writing the first draft. My agent is very excited about it and eager to get a draft in her hands. I am working on making this happen. I have a complete but messy first draft awaiting revisions and polishing.

The other one is also contemporary YA, though it’s controversial, a little darker and more literary. It’s high-concept and will appeal to fans of books like Speak, Dreamland, Looking for Alaska, Story of a Girl, etc. This one I’m just playing around with while I let the other one sit so I can tackle revisions with fresh eyes and a concrete plan.

Do you work on multiple projects at the same time? I have several novels in progress right now, and I find it productive, though a little distracting, to switch between them. How does this work for you?
This is another thing I get from the day job. At work, I’m always switching between multiple projects. They’re each like another world with all new styles, designs, animation techniques, etc. Like different books and characters. I’ve trained myself to switch between them and only take a minute or two to reorient myself in the new project.

Because of this, I don’t find it difficult to switch between writing projects, and I often work on more than one at a time. If I get stuck on one, I just pick up another. I can also force my brain to think about a certain project, so sometimes I’ll be mulling over revisions for one book while I’m writing brand new scenes in another. I know this doesn’t work for everyone, and I’m not sure I could do it as easily if I didn’t have to in the day job. I do prefer to revise linearly on one book straight through from beginning to the end before I switch to the next, but it doesn’t always work out that way.

What else have you written?
My novel on submission is called The Art of Selling My Sister and it’s about a girl who ruins her older sister’s life by destroying her chances at a college dance scholarship, and then must fix things before their parents find out.

I also have another manuscript with my agent, waiting it’s turn. Rhythm & Clues is about a free-spirit girl with an unconventional home life, who convinces her sheltered best friend to rebel against his overprotective parents. But he takes her advice too far and runs away with a dangerous crowd. Feeling responsible, she sets out to find him.

Finally, I have a trunk novel as well. I queried this one in 2006, and though I had a high request rate, ultimately the manuscript couldn’t get me an agent. I kept getting the same rejection: too edgy for YA, too juvenile for adult. The real issue was the college setting, and there was no way to revise it in one direction or the other, so I shelved it. It was about a girl who concocts a string of lies to weasel her way into a popular sorority, and then to keep up the facade, she indulges too far in the world of partying and binge drinking. Her actions result in the sorority being shut down, and she’s left to pick up the pieces. Even the title was too edgy: Premature Evacuation.

My newest novel, Unseen, also takes place in college, and I have heard that college in young adult fiction can be a hard sell. What do you think?
I don’t think it’s impossible, but I do think it limits your options. I know when I queried my college book, a lot of agents were deterred by the college setting because it automatically made the book hard to sell. Still, I got requests, so they were obviously willing to at least take a chance and see. The edginess factor in mine hindered it too much. I did a lot of research at the time to find college-set novels that weren’t part of a series where the characters started out in high school. I found a lot more books shelved in the literary section (I Am Charlotte Simmons by Tom Wolfe, Rules of Attraction by Bret Easton Ellis) than those shelved in the YA section (Reality Chick by Lauren Barnholdt). My book straddled both genres, literary writing with a YA style plot. It didn’t really work.

I think the real issue with college books being a hard sell is the lack of target audience. I think high school aged teens can’t relate to college books because the concept and subject matter is too foreign for them. Or they’ve already branched out into adult books. Adults are already over it by the time they graduate, they want to read about people their own age. And college kids are too busy studying or partying to read. Obviously I’m stereotyping here and there are exceptions to every rule–I’m sure most writers were avid readers in college like me–but I think the majority of people do fall into this category.

That being said, I do think it’s possible to sell a college aged book. I think it helps if you have an established readership, which I think you’ll easily gain with your debut! I also would err on the side of tame rather than edgy. I do think the edgy factor combined with the college setting made mine too hard to sell, plus the muddled genre, but I wonder if I would have had an easier time if I kept it a bit more sugarcoated.

Where are you at on your path to publication?
I have an agent who I absolutely adore, and The Art of Selling My Sister is out on submission. So I’m just waiting right now, trying not to check my email every 2 seconds, and distracting myself with writing.

I know what you mean about obsessively checking email in the hope of good news, or any news. How do you balance selling your work with actually writing it? Does business ever get in the way of creativity?
At the moment, I don’t think it interferes with my writing. The selling part is currently out of my hands. I did my job, wrote the best book I could write, and now it’s in the capable hands of my agent. I guess the selling part really came when querying, but while I queried one book, I focused on another WIP so I had something to distract me. I think that’s the best thing you can do while trying to sell one book–work on something else. The only thing I really sacrificed was the time it took to write the query and send it out. But on the other hand, that was time well spent.

Sometimes I do get antsy waiting for news on my book on submission, but then I think about how enthusiastic my agent is about me and my future books and that really motivates me during times I feel frustrated by all the waiting.

And though my goal is obviously to sell the books I write, I also just enjoy writing them. I don’t want to lose sight of this. I think it’s so so important to always enjoy it. And I know I couldn’t ever give up writing even if I’m the only person who ever reads my stuff. I love it, and I think that’s the part that helps me focus while trying to dive into the business-y stuff.

What advice do you have for writers?
Oh, where to begin? I’ve posted a lot about my love for outlines on my blog, so I’ll talk about something different here.

The thing that helped me the most with my writing was learning to master pitches and query letters. I started understanding hooks and what’s high-concept and which ideas were worth working on and which I should ignore. There’s an art to condensing an entire manuscript into such a small format while still keeping the reader’s attention, and I think being able to do that leads to tighter manuscripts as well when you practice the conservation of words. When I first started writing queries, I sucked. But then I practiced loglines. I read the PM deals and kept a list of which hooked me and which didn’t. I started analyzing why. I took current books and movies and figured out their loglines. Eventually I expanded to pitches and full paragraphs. I wrote a lot of pitches for ideas that I never worked on. So everyone dreads writing queries, and now they are my favorite thing. Too bad I don’t have to do it anymore! But I still reap the benefits. My first drafts are usually too long, and so studying how to condense turned a weakness into a strength.

What is your understanding of “high-concept” fiction? It took me some time to figure out this term, and I still see debates about its definition.
My definition of high-concept is being able to pitch the work in a short, hooky sentence that makes the person you’re telling the idea to say, “Oooh! I want to read that!” They need to immediately understand the premise and be intrigued by it. It’s something that immediately gives you a sense of conflict, what the stakes are, and still feels fresh and unique. Also, I once read this somewhere but I can’t remember where so apologies for the lack of source credit, but one of the best definitions I ever saw is that high-concept plot descriptions avoid certain weak verbs. If you have to say “struggles” or “deals with” as your main verb, it’s probably not high concept. I think that makes a lot of sense. Because those kind of verbs don’t hint at what’s at stake, and I think high-concept needs to.

If you’re unsure of the definition, I think the best way to understand it is to start reading the deal postings on Publisher’s Marketplace and make notes when a posting hooks you and makes you wish that book was already on your TBR shelf. Then you can ask yourself, what about it hooked you? Another method is to take books you have already read that you did not write and try to figure out their logline. If it’s too difficult to pair down into a single, hooky sentence, that book might not be high-concept. Even the 500+ page Twilight book can be broken down into a few words (teen girl falls in love with a vampire who wants to kill her). That one is interesting, I just realized, because I bet if you tried to tell Edward’s story in a logline, you’d have to resort to a “struggles” type verb. (Vampire struggles to suppress his desire to kill the human he loves). However, both of those show you the conflict (forbidden love), what’s at stake (her life), and the unique aspect (Romeo and Juliet with vampires).

That being said, you can most likely describe any book into a single sentence. The key is that it’s a hooky sentence that immediately lets you know what the story is about.

What are your inspirations?
Though I didn’t know what to call it at the time, I think the voice from the narration of My So-Called Life is the thing that initially made me want to be a writer. Now, I wrote stories way before this, but Angela’s voice spoke to me because of it’s raw emotion. I didn’t want to just tell stories anymore, I wanted to affect the reader, grab hold of them, and keep holding even 14 years later. More recently, my influences are Margaret Atwood, Sarah Dessen, Laurie Halse Anderson, Maureen Johnson, and though my books are nothing like his, I love Chuck Palahniuk’s voice.

I’m also influenced by 90s alternative music because it brings me back to the nostalgia of my own high school experiences and gets me in the mindset to write YA.

What has been the best part of writing?
My favorite part of writing is probably revising. Knowing you have a complete story that has problems and being able to see how to change them. I love the revelation moment when it all clicks and suddenly everything makes sense. The plan is there, you just have to execute it. And then the feeling of accomplishment when those changes work. I know, I’m weird, I like revising and query writing. I actually don’t like first drafting. The blank page scares me. So I try to bang it out as fast as I can just so I can slip into the comfort of revising.

And what has been the worst part?
Oops, I put that above. I find first drafting more difficult than anything else. I often try to trick myself so I don’t even know I’m first drafting. I create meticulous outlines, really detailed, sometimes with dialogue and description. My last outline was 18k. So when it came time to write the first draft, I’d already done the hard part, I just had to flesh it out. I’m not a fly-by-the-seat-of-your-pants writer. So writing without a plan makes me too nervous.

Where do you hope do be in a year?
Well, I hope to have a book deal for sure. And if that happens, I’d like to have a brilliant marketing plan I’ve already started implementing. You know, the usual…

And here’s a teaser from Shana’s The Art of Selling My Sister:
Three months, twelve days, and fifteen hours had passed since I ruined my sister’s life. I’d spent all one hundred thousand minutes since trying to make it up to her. Well, okay, I wasted some of those minutes sleeping. And I never really thought about her while showering or using the toilet because that’s just weird.

Presents didn’t work. The one thing Lara wanted couldn’t be bought. Apologies lost their meaning when I chanted them over and over, and she learned to tune me out. I even got a summer job and gave her all my earnings. I knew it was my fault she couldn’t dance anymore with her hip injury, and I figured I could at least try to pay for her physical therapy. But that backfired when she returned the money, claiming she didn’t want to owe me any debt. That was the last time she actually spoke to me on her own volition. At home, she went out of her way to avoid me, spending less time at the house each day.

I was about to give up and embrace the title of disowned sister like Lara so readily wanted me to wear. But today when I began my first day of 12th grade, a marketing assignment offered me the opportunity to confess my shameful actions against Lara while simultaneously giving her the one thing she still craved: the chance to be a star. I hoped this was what I needed to win Lara’s forgiveness. Maybe even rekindle our friendship.

The bell for last period sounded, and students shuffled into the hallway, gabbing about their new teachers and regaling each other with stories about exciting summers. I rushed down the hallway to the school newspaper meeting. In order to help Lara, I’d have to give up my spot on the swim team and join the newspaper staff instead. The meeting times for both organizations conflicted. I figured it was only fair. An eye for an eye. Or rather, an inability to dance in exchange for a relinquished cherished pastime.

Getting on newspaper wouldn’t be easy. I’d have to turn on the charm. I pushed open the door to the media classroom where Lonnie Weitzman, newly crowned editor-in-chief, stood in front of a desk, humming to himself.

“Kasey?”

I obviously took him by surprise because his small eyes opened as wide as possible, and he dropped the papers he was holding. His curly locks bounced as he bent underneath a desk to retrieve them.

I crouched beside him. He met my eyes, smiled, and bumped his head on the underside of the desk. He rubbed his head while I picked up the remaining papers and handed them back to him.

Lonnie fanned through the pages, looking hard at the numbers in the corners, pulling out various sheets and slipping them in between others. He moved at blink-and-you’ll-miss-it speed.

“It makes for a more interesting read all out of order,” I said. “Consider it a favor.”

He snorted a laugh. I placed my palm on his shoulder, ready to use that laugh to my advantage, but he flinched and stared at his papers, the pages vibrating in his shaky hands.

My smile wavered. My plan was to win him over with humor, but maybe I’d used too much. I didn’t mean to give him the wrong idea.

For the fourth interview in the Writers on the Rise series, please welcome Julia Karr and check out her blog here!

Hello, Julia! Can you tell us a little about yourself?

Hi Karen, First, thanks so much for interviewing me! A little bit about me – I have two grown daughters who both live within five miles of me, which I like a lot. I currently live with four cats and three dogs in a little house that is over one hundred years old.

What are you currently writing?

My current work in progress is a young adult fairy tale, but it’s not about fairies.

A fairy tale without fairies? Intriguing. Can you tell us more?

Certainly! It is a fairy tale along the lines of “Once upon a time…” about Princess Sierra of Plains, who refuses to marry until she’s gone on a quest to The Mountain of the Seven Stars. Two young men want to marry her – the boorish Lord Rufus Waverly and Prince Ingloff of Ocean Walls. Another boy, Waverly’s penurious stepbrother, Artie, just wants to make sure she and her Lady-In-Waiting, Felicity. reach the mountain unharmed by highwaymen, ruffians and suspicious innkeepers. Of course – there are magical horses, gypsy potions and tokens that Sierra’s mysterious great-uncle Tonkin left for her to take on her journey.

What else have you written?

I have a young adult speculative fiction book that my agent, Kate Schafer Testerman is currently submitting. I also have a completed middle grade book about a house that was a stop on the Underground Railroad. And my last year’s NaNo novel that is a young adult contemporary story about witches.

What was your path to signing with a literary agent? What would you recommend to a writer looking for an agent?

I did a lot of research before send out to agents. I used Agent Query, QueryTracker and also did a lot of exploring on Verla Kay’s Children’s Writers and Illustrators website’s discussion board – paying attention to who was buying what and how responsive certain agents were. I also got help from people on Verla’s in tweaking my query letter. I can’t emphasize enough how important a spot-on query letter is! I did most of my querying via email (I’m definitely an instant-gratification junkie!) I first sent out around 10 query letters and whenever I’d get a rejection – I’d send out another couple of queries. All total – my stats on querying were something like: 35 queries – 12 form rejections – 7 personal rejections – 8 requests for partials – 8 no responses (ever!) and from those 8 partials I got 4 requests for fulls. All of those were agents I would’ve loved to have signed with. However, you only get one! And, after talking with her and doing some revisions – I signed with Kate!

My recommendation to writers looking for agents… research, research, research! Be sure that the agents you are querying want what you’re writing. It’s a waste of time (and paper & stamps if you send snail mail) to query agents who do not represent the kind of work you are writing.

Also, when you get the call, be prepared with some written-down questions that you want to ask your prospective agent. I say “written-down” because I guarantee that in the middle of your internal squee-ing about talking with a real-live agent you will forget that you actually have questions to ask someone who is essential becoming a partner with you on the road to publication. Also – your agent-to-be will in all likelihood ask if you want to contact a few of their clients for references – which, of course, you should! Have some questions prepared for those clients, too. (I’d be more than willing to share my list of questions with anyone who’d like them.)

Where are you at on your path to publication?

I signed with my agent, Kate, last February (almost a year ago) and she is working on finding a home for my first novel, XVI.

Is XVI the title of your first novel? What is it about, and what inspired you to write it?

Yes – XVI is my first novel. It’s speculative fiction – and the logline is “In the year 2150, turning sixteen is anything but sweet.” It’s a dystopian novel set in Chicago in the mid-2100′s, about a girl on the verge of her sixteenth birthday. When her mother is brutally murdered, Nina sets out to find the father she’d always been told was dead. Along the way, she has to keep from being selected as a FeLS (Federal Liaison Specialist – which is the only way for low-tier girls like Nina to better themselves – but, so many of them disappear…never to be heard from again.) She also has to keep her little sister, Dee, out of the clutches of Dee’s murderous father and keep from falling in love with a boy who is not at all what he seems to be.

XVI was my first NaNoWriMo novel – and it was inspired by an image that popped into my head one day of a punk rock girl, headphones on, walking down the streets of a big city (originally New York, but I know Chicago better, having lived there for five years) trying to ignore everything going on around her – blaring advertisements, homeless people, traffic, etc. From that beginning on Nov. 1st, 2006 – came the entire story.

What advice do you have for writers?

I would say first off, read, read, read. Writers learn so much about writing by reading. I mean, how many times have those of us who write read something and known “I can do that” – maybe even “I can do that better!”? We learn what works and what doesn’t work by reading what is already out there. Secondly, after all that reading – write, write, write! Practice makes perfect! Well… I don’t think as writers we would ever say, “Oh, I’ve written the perfect story!” Maybe we write the perfect phrase or paragraph, find the perfect word to express what we’re trying to say – but, as writers, we must always strive to do better. And, we do better by first doing!

Do you read differently now that you are a novelist yourself? For example, do you dissect a story and study the technique of a particular author, or do you listen purely to your reactions as a reader?

I do read differently, but not consciously so. For sure, I have a reaction when I read something either really good (most recently, The Absolutely True Diary of a Part-Time Indian by Sherman Alexie – what a great voice that Junior has!) Or, something really bad (no, I will not name names here, but…) My main purpose in reading is to be entertained (or, with non-fiction, to learn something new) – but, I do find that since I’ve been writing I am much more aware of what works (or doesn’t) in what I’m reading. And, for the first time in my life – ever – I am willing to put a book down if it’s not good. In the past – I would read anything, but not any more.

What are your inspirations?

I get inspired by the oddest things – a sentence of dialogue will pop into my head, or I’ll wake up with a snippet of my last dream still roiling around in my brain. My latest NaNo novel was inspired by a local news story. Inspiration is all around – the key for me is to grab it and hang on like it’s a bucking bronco! I don’t like to let go until the first draft is done (although, in all honesty, I have a computer file full of partial first drafts! Lots of stories waiting to be written!)

What has been the best part of writing?

Oooo…there are a few “bests.” Like, finishing a first draft – woot! Hearing my critique partners say they like what I’ve written, but… and then helping me to see where I can make my story better. Yeah – that’s nice. Also, revising. I love to make things even better than I thought they could be.

And what has been the worst part?

All of the above! Ha! Really though – when I finish a first draft, after the elation comes the “oh, no… it’s over!” And, I put it away to let it sit and I miss those characters who have become my steadfast companions for however long it took to write the first draft. And – when my crit partners let me know something isn’t working – sometimes it’s something I loved (the ‘kill your darlings’ part of writing.) And, revising – can be like giving a cat a bath.

Where do you hope do be in a year?

In a year I hope to have at least one book under contract and two others for submitting.

How do you stay on track and accomplish your goals? I know it can seem daunting to summit the mountain of publication for writers just starting to climb.

Daunting to say the least! When I am working on something new (like The Mountain of the Seven Stars), I set up a calendar and work toward the goal of 1667 words a day (for a first draft.) Those are NaNo numbers – you’ll have over 50K in 30 days if you write that much. I track my writing daily & do my best to exceed word count. This past NaNo (2008), I reached 50K in 30 days, but continued writing for another five days in order to finish the story (Remembrance – a contemporary YA novel about witches.) That story is waiting in the wings for revision.

My biggest challenge is working a regular job in Human Resources from 9-5 and then coming home to take care of my dogs, cats & house. Often I will get up at 4:30 a.m. and write before I get ready for work. I guess if a person has stories inside that need to come out – they will find time to write, no matter what!

And here’s a teaser from Julia’s The Mountain of the Seven Stars:
“But I don’t want to get married, Father.” Princess Sierra’s eyes flashed as she set down the silver hairbrush. “That’s so old-fashioned, to be married by the time you’re sixteen. Besides, I have to go on a quest. It says so, right here.” She picked up a book from the table and held it out in front of the King. “Page one hundred five says that the heir to the monarchy must complete his quest prior to marriage or his ascension to the throne.” She dropped the book onto the table. “You went on a quest, didn’t you?”

The King sighed. “Of course. I have told you the story many times. But, girl heirs are not expected to–”

“Didn’t Mother have a quest? She would’ve been queen of Shifting Sands if you hadn’t married her. Right?”

“Yes, my dear, but those are the rules of her country.” He shook his head.

“If something happened to Prince Goric, I’m the heir to that throne, too, aren’t I?”

“Enough, daughter!” The King strode to the window, leaning his hands on the sill.

Sierra watched his shoulders rise and fall. She knew she was right and her father was struggling to control his temper; but she was determined not to give up her plan to go on a quest.

Without turning around, the King said, “Ocean Walls has imposed a heavy tariff on exporting grain. We must use their ports, since Plains is land-locked and our largest buyers are across the sea.”

“What does that have to do with my quest?” Sierra joined her father. Knowing that sweetness usually worked better than arguing with him, she tucked her arm through his and snuggled close. “We have gold enough to pay any tariffs that stuffy old King Vongus charges.”

The King was silent.

“We do have enough gold, don’t we?” Sierra had never given money a thought. If she wanted something, it was hers. She was generous with gifts to her servants and showered presents on her lady-in-waiting, Felicity Arbogast, who was like a sister to her. She never imagined there could be a problem with money.

“When that strange blight hit the wheat last summer,” the King said, “our shipments were greatly reduced. Smaller exports combined with higher tariffs means less gold coming in. If King Vongus had a reason to look more kindly on Plains…”

“What?” The Princess pulled away from her father. “You aren’t thinking…” She shook her head so vehemently that her hair swirled around like a tornado. “Not Ingloff. Never!” When she saw the King’s expression, she knew that was exactly what he had in mind.

For this week’s interview, the third in the Writers on the Rise series, please welcome Leah Clifford and check out her blog here. I’m having great fun talking with these authors, and I hope you are, too. Comment away!

Hello, Leah! Can you tell us a little about yourself?
I’m twenty-seven years old.  I love music, especially remixes that sound nothing like the original.  I’ve worked as an extreme cave guide (helmet, headlamp, mud), flight attendant, waitress, pizza delivery girl and for a few months I sold my belongings on Ebay to pay my bills.  All of my worldly possessions used to fit in the back of a 2004 Chevy Impala, but now I have too many books.

What are you currently writing?
In first place right now is the sequel to Reapers, which is the YA urban fantasy that I’m about start sending queries for.  There are a few other shinies that keep popping up though, so we’ll see what happens!

What else have you written?
Growing up, I was a short story kind of girl.  There were a half dozen or so attempts at novels (and one very odd screenplay for some reason) but I never finished any of them.  I was twenty-five when I wrote my first novel, which was a pretty safe haunting-type story, and horribly overwritten.  The more I queried it, the more I knew I could do better.  It now rests in peace, safely trunked.

Have your experiences on the job inspired your writing? I’m particularly curious about extreme cave guide.
Haha! The caving job was the best.  I was living in Colorado and I had to walk alone through a canyon and up a mountain to get to work.  I carried Bear Spray, which is like supercharged pepper spray and comes with a disclaimer in bold that sometimes not only does it NOT work, but pisses off the bears.  Good times.  So, I was always on the lookout.  Of course, your mind tends to play tricks on you, and one day I couldn’t shake the feeling that something was following me (for all I know something was…) but instead of thinking about mountain lions or chipmunks, I latched onto the idea that what was back there, just behind the rocks, was Death.  I wondered what would happen if it caught up.  I also wondered what would happen if what came around the corner was only a person (in my head I was picturing a smiling teenager), and if that would be more or less frightening.  This was about three years before Reapers was written, but it was one of many seeds.

Where are you at on your path to publication?
I’ve got my toes curled around the edge of the Query Pool, and will be jumping in sometime in the next few weeks!

I remember being daunted before I first jumped into the Query Pool. How are you writing your query letter and researching agents?
I’m actually really excited to query this time around.  That said, it usually takes me about five minutes of trying before I can press send on queries.

I’m REALLY bad at query letters.  The first draft is usually something like… There’s this character, see, and they have issues and stuff, but then they have more issues and CLIFFHANGER OF AWESOME! (You know, to leave the agent wanting more) Then I elaborate.  Then I cut.  Then I rewrite it.  Again.  And again.  Then it gets posted for other writers to critique, which is a really important phase.  This isn’t your mom telling you it’s great.  Or your friends (unless they’re like mine and will tell you (in graphic detail) how bad it sucks, rather than send you out with crap).  These should be people that haven’t read your story so they won’t be able to fill in gaps themselves.  It will help you see what sections need more or less detail so that your story is coming across in the best way possible.  There are quite a few forums out there for query review.  I use Querytracker.net because not only do they have a really supportive forum, but the main site is also the best tool for researching agents.  Check it out.  Seriously.

What advice do you have for writers?
I’m gonna skip the read and write, because that seems to be the ‘go to’ answer and say “Try harder.”  I really believe that writing is something you have to work at to get better.  Look at each chapter or even sentence and ask yourself if you can improve it, and then do!  Also, lots of coffee.

I think it can be easy to forget the importance of trying harder and growing as a writer, particularly if you are comfortable with one genre, point of view, or voice.  How have you grown as a writer over the years?
It’s easy to slip into a rut and develop patterns, but this is almost always harmful.  Let me put it this way:  If you’re comfortable, you’re not pushing yourself.  If you’re not pushing yourself, you’re not trying harder and so you aren’t going to get any better.  Writing in third person has always been really difficult for me, but that’s the POV that Reapers needed to be told in.  Trying to write in third person was really tough.  Everything felt flat at first, and I almost stopped writing a few times.  But it challenged me and I think (hope!) it worked and that I’ve grown.

What are your inspirations?
My dad has been my biggest inspiration so far.  I’d been saying for years that I wanted to be a writer, and one day while we were in the car he asked me what I planned to do for a career.  When I said I was going to try writing (again) he grumbled something about how I’d been saying that forever and if I really wanted it I would have done it already.  At first I was really angry, but then I realized he was right.  So I sat my butt in the chair and proved him wrong.   My dad is REALLY good at reverse psychology.

When I started querying my first novel, I found a site called Query Tracker that has a great forum, and another of my huge inspirations has been watching so many of my friends snag agents and even publishing deals over the past year.

What has been the best part of writing?
The little bits of magic! The moments of realization where tiny details that didn’t seem important they were first written ended up being crucial later on.  I’ve loved getting to know new characters and finding out what happens next (I’m a seat of the pantser so I never know how it’s going to end).  One of the best side effects of writing that I wasn’t expecting has been all of the friends I’ve met through Livejournal, Query Tracker, and Facebook.

I used to be more of a seat of the pantser writer, but now I outline more and more. What advice do you have for writers wondering whether to plot first or wing it?
I think everyone is different in terms of their method.  There are some writers who have to know their ending before they put down the first sentence.  I know of another who has to have a title.  Some have pages and pages of outline and just fill in the details.  One of the most important things to learn is that your way, whatever that way might be, is right.  As long as it works, you’re doing it right.  Do what you need to do to get the words on the page.

Personally, I can’t outline, because most of my drive is in finding out the rest of the story.  My secret fear is that an agent will ask me for a synopsis of the next two books, because I have absolutely NO clue how the second story is going to end, let alone the third.

And what has been the worst part of writing?
Learning to kill my darlings! LOL! I have a file of lines and sections I’ve had to cut because they didn’t move the story along in the right way or just didn’t work. Most of them are awful, but some of them I wish I could have kept.

I also keep all my murdered darlings a file that often grows several times longer than the manuscript itself, embarrassingly enough. How do you decide which of your darlings to kill or keep?
Cutting your favorite bits is always the worst, isn’t it?  Unfortunately, it’s simple to decide.  If it doesn’t work or doesn’t move the plot forward, it’s gotta go.  Great in theory right?  Not so easy in the real world.

Where do you hope do be in a year?
Signed with a major deal, of course! (Hey! It could happen!)  But honestly, I’d be happy to be where I am now…at the computer with my story file open and the itch to write.

And here’s a teaser from Leah’s Reapers:
Eden peered through the little window beside the security door, keeping herself just out of view as she watched them.  Outside, on the stairs of the apartment building, five reapers were already waiting for her.

They wore their glamours well.  Every trace of death was polished over with flesh, pierced and tattooed to fit in with the mortals.  To the morning rush of pedestrians, they would have been chalked up as street kids.  Eden knew better.  It would only take a swipe of her fingertips on their skin to drop their façade and show the truth.  After all, she was one of them.

Five today.  It had never been so many.

“Time to greet the fan club,” Eden scoffed as she twisted the knob.

The security door clicked shut behind her.  She tucked the key into the pocket of her black pea coat and turned to face them.  As usual, they were all boys.  Their whispers, snippets of “has to be the one” and “right where she was supposed to be”, intensified as they caught sight of her.

“Where who said I’d be?” she demanded.  “Who sent you?”

“It’s true isn’t it?”  The one who spoke up couldn’t have been more than twelve.  “That you breathe death?”  Eden rolled her eyes as he stared at her, taking her in like some kind of urban legend come to life.  She didn’t need Touch to tell they were new, all of them.

Bonus: Check out Leah’s book trailer here!

For the second interview in the Writers on the Rise series, please welcome Tez Miller from Australia. You can check out her Livejournal here, and her WordPress blog here.

Hello, Tez! Can you tell us a little about yourself?

Hey all!  Born, raised and still living in suburban Victoria, Australia, I’m a child of the ’80s with a passion for animated comedy and a weakness for daggy pop songs. Indeed, this is the high life.

I’m American, so I’m curious about the publishing world in Australia. Also, has your country influenced your writing?

First off, there aren’t many literary agencies in Oz, and I don’t think any accept e-queries. Curtis Brown is the largest. I’m quite interested in Selwa Anthony, but I think she has a referral-only policy as she doesn’t have contact info anywhere online (and though she’s in a different state, I kind of doubt her info is public in her state, either).

As for publishers: word on the street is that only HarperCollins and Hachette accept/publish fantasy. Of the major publishers, anyway. Sci-fi writer Marianne de Pierres (though under a different name) is having a paranormal romance published with Allen & Unwin, Australia’s leading independent publisher.

Many an Australian has realised that their chances are better in the American market. Keri Arthur and Max Barry were published in the US before anywhere else, because they scored American agents. The UK market isn’t bad as Australia’s, but generally speaking, I think we’re all aiming for careers in the US.

But that’s just as writers. Australia is big on reading (so we’re told), and crime fiction consistently sells well. Non-fiction, too. Book prices vary wildly, though. Mass market adult paperbacks from Hachette and Harper are about $19.95 Recommended Retail Price, but that’s very general. I complain a lot about book prices, I know, and get rather jealous when my American peeps can buy a mass market for $7.

As for if my country has influenced my writing? Isn’t everyone influenced by theirs?  I’ve lived here all my life, so it’s what I know. Yes, British and American culture are thoroughly present here, but instead of taking over the Australian identity, they’re more of an added bonus. I don’t think I could write something set in another country simply because I haven’t lived the life. Cheerleaders, pep rallies, school spirit and homecoming dances? I would’ve never survived North American high school, so many congratulations and well done to those of you who have.

But when it comes to manuscripts, I tend to set the spelling-and-grammar check to US-English instead of Australian-English. Use double quotation marks instead of singular. As for certain terms and phrases…I pick and choose from all that’s on offer. When it comes it profanities, I rely on colloquial Irish ones. But since I believe you’re a YA writer, perhaps your YA followers shouldn’t be reading my swears on your blog.

What are you currently writing?

A futuristic YA, currently titled Unfrozen. I’ve never written a futuristic before, and I’m having trouble finding my feet. But though this is rather challenging for me, I think when it’s eventually finished, it’ll be my favourite. Because yes, I play favourites.

In what ways is the futuristic genre challenging you, and what advice do you have for writers exploring genres new to them?

I think I’ve always thought of myself as an ideas person more than an actual writer. It goes for my regular life as well: I know what I want to say, but I have trouble trying to convey it. Or I get to the point, and skimp on the details. Which is why my wordcounts are closer to 60,000 than 100,000.

So with the future comes science and technology. Considering my mobile (cell to those in the US) phone was a hand-me-down that I got in 2004, and it only does calls and texts (no photos, no videos, and monophonic-only ringtones)…I’m so not down with technology  The science, however: I’m interested in it, though I don’t quite understand it, which means I struggle to explain it. While I’ve tried to research some stuff, other parts are just exhausting. So I’m using the tried-and-tested fiction writer’s method: making stuff up.  Besides, it’s 100 years into the future. At worse, I’ll be laughed at – like when I tried to read Philip K. Dick this year, and he was writing about stuff in the 1980s that…well, never ended up happening in the ’80s. Or even now.

So when it comes to a new genre, writers, your mind may bend. I do recommend you research, and basically pick and choose from what you come across. You want to write an urban fantasy, but don’t like how someone wrote their vampires? What would your vampires be like? Take it from there…

What else have you written?

Two completed urban fantasies – one involving shapeshifters, the other vampires. I got partway through one about ghosts, and a couple of chapters into a zombie novel.

Where are you at on your path to publication?

I queried agents and publishers for the two completed manuscripts, but I’ve stopped for the time being. Last month I tried rewriting the shapeshifter novel, but I stopped because I realised that maybe it’s supposed to be a trunk novel. But I’m pleased to have come to the conclusion that my writing is better now than when I first wrote it, a few years ago.

What advice do you have for writers?

Realise your strengths and weaknesses. Don’t let your ego turn you into a beeyatch. But try to have some level of confidence, as that’s the only thing that’ll motivate you to actually finish something. And I speak from experience: as you can tell by my unfinished works, I have commitment problems. And I think that maybe you shouldn’t read in your genre whilst your writing it, because…well, you can get intimidated by their greatness and it might put a downer on your confidence.

I also find myself occasionally intimidated by the greatest writers in my genre, but at the same time I find their greatness inspiring. What do you think? And how do you balance Tez the Writer with Tez the Reader?

I’m predominantly Tez the Reader, though more often I’m Tez the Reviewer. Reading to review is different than reading just for the fun of it. As a result, now I can’t seem to read without reviewing/critiquing in my own head. But I can’t seem to separate my writing self from me, so I struggle to review/critique my own work. Which is where the critique group comes in…

At the moment Tez the Writer is still mulling things over. My own work is intimidating me, though I assure you I’m in no way one of the greatest writers in my genre. Yet *ahem* “There’s nothing in this section; you just wrote something very vague or inconsequential. These people found out something, but how did they find it out? What happened when they went to…” And so on. My brain blocks me off; says “don’t make me do stuff”. My mind and I don’t get along very well.

Aye, I have attack of the jealousies often. Reading someone else’s work, I’ll think I’ll never write anything as great as this. But if it weren’t for these authors in the first place, I may not have been inspired at all. The key, I read recently, is “similar, but different”.

Meaning it might be wise for your work to be similar enough to others so that it’s marketable, but different enough so readers won’t think they’re reading what some other author could have written. If you find the balance between similar and different, we all want to know.

What are your inspirations?

For my completed urban fantasies, they were inspired by “has anyone done this kind of shifter?” and “that’s not how I’d do vampires”. It’s true, writers: not every novel you read is perfect for you, so use the less-perfect ones to figure out what you didn’t like, and how you’d improve it. As for my futuristic, I fell in love with the genre through Dorchester’s SHOMI imprint, Gena Showalter’s Teen Alien Huntress novels, Mary E. Pearson’s The Adoration of Jenna Fox and Stephenie Meyer’s The Host. They taught me that not all sci-fi is hard sci-fi, which is why I probably call what I write “futuristic” instead. They taught me it’s not all about the gadgets, space and aliens, but society itself and how it affects people. And let’s not forget real life! When you think about what’s happening in the world, you can’t pretend that it’ll be all right, everything will fix itself. I never forget the possibility that things could be worse – and use that thought to inspire my writing.

What has been the best part of writing?

Feedback from my critique group. Like when they say they laughed at something, it makes me feel that it’s not all bad, that there is some hope for me after all. As for the actual writing, I think I’m best at dialogue. And though like most others I cringe at some stuff I wrote, but elsewhere I’ve read my own passages and think, “Hey, this isn’t too shoddy – it’s actually kind of good.”

What advice do you have for writers looking for a critique group? I know it can be challenging to find a good match, though quite rewarding when you do.

I found my critique group via Kelley Armstrong’s Discussion board. There are several Online Writing Groups there, and as a newbie you’re assigned to a group. Then later as other groups expand or contract, you’re given the option to move to a different group. At least that’s been my experience; I joined in 2004, I think. Not only is my group fabulous at catching my typos, but basically they point out bits they don’t understand, or things that don’t seem to fit. This lets me know that I need to clarify, and explain more, or try it in a different way. Because if you think I confuse myself enough, you don’t want to know how I screw up other people’s brains.

And what has been the worst part?

Rejection. Woe is me, get out the tiny violins…  I’m not too good with details. Like what people are wearing, what the room looks like, what’s that smell… But I guess the really worse bit is getting started after a long break. I doubt my abilities, think my skills aren’t up to scratch enough, my plots too predictable, my characters without arcs, etc. In other words, I’m the worst part.

I’m no stranger to self-doubt, and I also look at my writing with new scrutiny after I take a break. What advice do you have for the self-doubting?

Ah, self-doubt – or, as I think of it, being whiny and emo. ”Woe is me; my work’s made of suck…” I have to laugh at myself. If you take yourself too seriously…well, being able to parody yourself puts things into perspective. A few months ago I had a look at a trunk novel, and while I acknowledge that I had some decent ideas, I just wasn’t executing them well enough. Not that my writing/plotting/characterisation is so superfantastic now, but it’s a lot better. I can see improvement. I’m learning. Only maybe applying that learning, we’ll see.

From reading published authors’ blogs, Twitters and whatnot, they suffer from doubt weasels too. But they rewrite, because that’s what authors do…and so should other writers. And if you keep writing but you know you’re still not hitting the mark…well, unless it has a deadline, sounds like the two of you need time about. Have an affair with a different story instead. If you and your troublesome story are meant to be, you’ll find each other again… Okay, I am so not a romance writer, so please insert your own cliche/trope.

Where do you hope to be in a year?

With at least one finished draft of this futuristic. Hopefully, that’s achievable.

And here’s a teaser from Tez’s Unfrozen:

Officially it’s called the Cargo Transporter, but is otherwise known as the Coffin Truck. Off the record, of course, since people smuggling is kind of illegal…

Whether they are dead or undead.

But transporting alive, conscious and fully consenting humans on the way to their choice of destination? It’s moral, though the New Government won’t bypass that law. Once you’re a registered citizen of the Southeast Sector, there’s no leaving – unless you’re court-ordered to the Twin Islands Convict Settlement. If the Government decides not to order your death, that is.

You’ve got to take note of these variables.

I press the button on my headset to initiate communication. “This is your driver speaking,” I begin, deliberately omitting my name. “One by one, please announce your presence and physiological conditions.”

All eight Coffin Critters (officially: “cargo”) take turns announcing their numbers. Except for a little stiffness in the joints, and some mild claustrophobia, inside my truck the people encased in cryogenic tanks – not connected to any power supply – are doing fine.

Business as usual.

“Estimated time of arrival in five minutes,” I announce to my passengers. “Keep holding on, Number Six.”

I sign off just as I hit the outskirts of the State International Airport. The land was not entirely decimated when the bombs hit back in 2102. But still there are phenomenal numbers of parking spaces. Never mind that the airport doesn’t have much commercial business anymore.

Driving is so much more straightforward when there’s no traffic, no vehicles sentinel in their waiting areas.

I haven’t been to the airport in a while, so I have to fudge around until I find the designated spot for Export, where Phillip Island is awaiting my delivery. Formerly a Customs Officer of the government, he is now airport staff and can make up his own damn rules, which is damn handy for someone like me who’s trying to run a black market business here.

And that he happens to have a fetish for youngish redheads certainly helps.